Newbie attempt on Still life C&C please

[sameer_Sh65]

was trying my hand at still life. C&C to improve will be appreciated.

Regards
Sam

 

[foxtwo]

quite well done. improvements,

1. a more interesting background that links with the product.

2. a more defined form on the bottle & glass. place black cards around the subject out-of-frame.

3. diffuse light.

 

[sameer_Sh65]

THanx Foxtwo,

Appreciate your comments and agree with them, will try to incorporate then as I go along and shoot more.

Thanx Sam

 

[eikin]

i find the positioning of the glass wierd ... being an important secondary element, i am not sure what the toppled position is trying to convey

 

[Maltese]

Generally good attempt
for some first look observation, your objects does not comes to life to bring viewer to go into the object instantaneously. Usually neutral coloured still product like crystals, glasswares, silvers, plates etc require a sparkling feel. Your background does not go in tendem with the objects. The easiest to achieve this effect is to use black shadowless background with strong strobo lightings.