Natalia Part I

[tuglaq]

Guys,

Newbies attempt..

Thanks to modelinn for arranging the shoot..

All taken with D70, 50 mm 1.8, 85 mm 1.8 or 80-200 mm 2.8 Leans

C & C for improvement appreciated..

Thanks
Shiek

 

[AhV]

why the tight crops ? Modelinn's shoots are very fashion-oriented with some styling involved ..and we cant see the outfits in any of your pics


DP is not going to like the last shot :bsmilie:

 

[tuglaq]

why the tight crops ? Modelinn's shoots are very fashion-oriented with some styling involved ..and we cant see the outfits in any of your pics


DP is not going to like the last shot :bsmilie:

Havent done PP yet, Comming up soon...

Those shared was the head shots..

Shiek

 

[Virgo]

Agree with AhV. Show some outfits, not flesh! :bsmilie:

why the tight crops ? Modelinn's shoots are very fashion-oriented with some styling involved ..and we cant see the outfits in any of your pics


DP is not going to like the last shot :bsmilie:

 

[jeff49er]

why the tight crops ? Modelinn's shoots are very fashion-oriented with some styling involved ..and we cant see the outfits in any of your pics


DP is not going to like the last shot :bsmilie:

Well TS mentioned that he is a newbie.

Then again just shoot and post. Dont bother about somebody's harsh critique :thumbsup:

 

[Octane69]

that wisp of hair in the first two shots are super distracting... the last shot... i agree totally with ah V....:bsmilie:

 

[melvinmah]

Tight crop is okay to me. But to TS, my suggestion is not to post too many headshots. Vary a little. Also, watch out for dark eyes. It really ruins the portrait.

 

[big_lan]

try +0.6 to +1 exp compensation?

the dark area real dark, and even with PP might cause some noise to develop.

 

[tuglaq]

Thanks for all your comments guys...Appreciate..

Will make note of those sugestions..

Shiek

 

[Liew]

could be the lousy monitor, but some shots are 1/3 - 1/2 stop underexposed.

there's warm colour cast in the skin tone.

there's also some of the model's face details buried in the shadow.

 

[ConnorMcLeod]

Face too dark. Intentional? No reflector? facing the wrong direction? :dunno:

 

[JamesW]

Did you use flash? I'm not sure did you sharpen the image, but it felt alittle too oversharpened to me.