Natalia Part I


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tuglaq

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Guys,

Newbies attempt..

Thanks to modelinn for arranging the shoot..

All taken with D70, 50 mm 1.8, 85 mm 1.8 or 80-200 mm 2.8 Leans

C & C for improvement appreciated..









Thanks
Shiek
 

AhV

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why the tight crops ? Modelinn's shoots are very fashion-oriented with some styling involved ..and we cant see the outfits in any of your pics :)


DP is not going to like the last shot :bsmilie:
 

tuglaq

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why the tight crops ? Modelinn's shoots are very fashion-oriented with some styling involved ..and we cant see the outfits in any of your pics :)


DP is not going to like the last shot :bsmilie:
Havent done PP yet, Comming up soon...

Those shared was the head shots..

Shiek
 

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Agree with AhV. Show some outfits, not flesh! :bsmilie:

why the tight crops ? Modelinn's shoots are very fashion-oriented with some styling involved ..and we cant see the outfits in any of your pics :)


DP is not going to like the last shot :bsmilie:
 

jeff49er

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why the tight crops ? Modelinn's shoots are very fashion-oriented with some styling involved ..and we cant see the outfits in any of your pics :)


DP is not going to like the last shot :bsmilie:
Well TS mentioned that he is a newbie.

Then again just shoot and post. Dont bother about somebody's harsh critique :thumbsup:
 

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Tight crop is okay to me. But to TS, my suggestion is not to post too many headshots. Vary a little. Also, watch out for dark eyes. It really ruins the portrait.
 

big_lan

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try +0.6 to +1 exp compensation?

the dark area real dark, and even with PP might cause some noise to develop.
 

Liew

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could be the lousy monitor, but some shots are 1/3 - 1/2 stop underexposed.

there's warm colour cast in the skin tone.

there's also some of the model's face details buried in the shadow.
 

ConnorMcLeod

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Face too dark. Intentional? No reflector? facing the wrong direction? :dunno:
 

JamesW

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Did you use flash? I'm not sure did you sharpen the image, but it felt alittle too oversharpened to me.
 

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