My video entry

[dinxcarin]

Hi all!
I am joining a video contest on www.mylot.com

I need comments on my video. I wana know if I am able to deliver the message.
Pls. help. Good or bad I'll take it.
here's the link, Thanks!

mylot...mylife...

 

[GoneForGood]

Yoh Man!

You wanted good or bad dude..Well, the good thing is that it's pretty kewl
and the message i feel is present.
The bad part i think is that it's all just texts so i dont know if that is what
they are looking for.. there again all the best!!

goneforgood

 

[dinxcarin]

Hehe! Thanks! They already have a winner. Better try my luck next time. Thanks again!

 

[Johnaturn]

i hope my comments din come too late.. .. i felt that the words were difficult to read.. reason being .. u had too many of them coming out at one goal.. i always follow this rule: haf a centre of focus.. sth that the audience/viewer can look at/ focus on .. that is where i put my screen elements to convey the msg..

beta luck nxt time

 

[icychilled]

i like the text effect when my life changed to my lot. thought that was quite cool. what did you use huh? :embrass: