Man in blue.


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phero-man

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Portrait of a man in blue. He seemed patient enough for me to compose this abstract, so I thought of making him a point of focus.



Single exposure. Raw scan. Circular polariser.
 

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The blue lorry and the words on the glass panel actually distracted me from the main subject. (which i think its alittle too small)

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yeah I thought the blue lorry sucks too... I'll try harder next time..
I wanted the words to convey a message "spoken" by the man in blue. He delivers food.
 

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Actually the blue man doesnt convey a strong enough message.....too small ....

I guess from one look you really wont know tat he sends food.
Plus the bridge and the walkway in the foreground...equally distracting. :)

Nice try.
 

phero-man

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thanks for your comments!

I will keep trying!
 

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If the subject is "man in blue", then he should at least be prominent in the picture and not so small. When I 1st look at the picture I had to spend some efforts trying to find that "man in blue" in the pic...

Ya man, keep trying, that is the spirit! :thumbsup: :)
 

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Thank you guys for being so encouraging.. me getting out later with 3 sets of batteries... hopefully there's something I can show and tell... hehe
 

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