Man in blue.

[phero-man]

Portrait of a man in blue. He seemed patient enough for me to compose this abstract, so I thought of making him a point of focus.

Single exposure. Raw scan. Circular polariser.

 

[sbs99]

The blue lorry and the words on the glass panel actually distracted me from the main subject. (which i think its alittle too small)

 

[phero-man]

yeah I thought the blue lorry sucks too... I'll try harder next time..
I wanted the words to convey a message "spoken" by the man in blue. He delivers food.

 

[sbs99]

Actually the blue man doesnt convey a strong enough message.....too small ....

I guess from one look you really wont know tat he sends food.
Plus the bridge and the walkway in the foreground...equally distracting.

Nice try.

 

[phero-man]

thanks for your comments!

I will keep trying!

 

[ziploc]

If the subject is "man in blue", then he should at least be prominent in the picture and not so small. When I 1st look at the picture I had to spend some efforts trying to find that "man in blue" in the pic...

Ya man, keep trying, that is the spirit! :thumbsup:

 

[phero-man]

Thank you guys for being so encouraging.. me getting out later with 3 sets of batteries... hopefully there's something I can show and tell... hehe