1.in which area is critique or feedback to be given?
Any form of Critique or comments that can help me to improve.
2.what were you hoping to achieve with this image?
For this picture i was trying make the model look good in the picture so that she will like it,also trying to achieve what a basic portraits shot should be.
3. under what circumstance was the picture taken?(physical conditions/emotions)
it was taken using a Nikon D3 with a Nippon Kogaku 50mm F2 Non-AI lens, camera on manual mode, lens too on manual focus,with 1 beauty dish on the right, 1 softbox on the left and 2 continous light acting is hair light.
4.thread-starter's personal thoughts about the image.
i like the nikon non-ai lens suprisingly is sharp , but is a not easy lens to use everything have to be manual,hope that the skin tone is ok to the expert expectation.Thanks to everyone in advance.