D danlin New Member Feb 17, 2006 278 0 0 Apr 27, 2006 #2 hey guys, ur comments wld be very much apreciated =) Thanks!
D danlin New Member Feb 17, 2006 278 0 0 Apr 29, 2006 #3 urm can u guys view e image? c&c welcome! Thanks alot...
E ExplorerZ Senior Member Jan 9, 2006 7,880 1 38 West Apr 29, 2006 #4 background is good. i think the main subject here is the lamp post and the bird became a distraction instead of main subject juz my noob cents
background is good. i think the main subject here is the lamp post and the bird became a distraction instead of main subject juz my noob cents
D danlin New Member Feb 17, 2006 278 0 0 Apr 29, 2006 #5 thnks 4 ur comments. but if there were no birds on the lamp post, it wld be boring n lifeless dun u think? I shld ve cropped it tighter i think...
thnks 4 ur comments. but if there were no birds on the lamp post, it wld be boring n lifeless dun u think? I shld ve cropped it tighter i think...
E eikin Senior Member Apr 27, 2004 10,192 0 0 東京 Tokyo Apr 29, 2006 #6 i think the city skyline in the background is distracting, you might want to consider alternative positions the next time round
i think the city skyline in the background is distracting, you might want to consider alternative positions the next time round
A agentmonkey New Member Jul 10, 2004 508 0 0 www.flickr.com Apr 29, 2006 #7 i like the birds, but would you think it would be better to have the lampost aligned slightly more to the right? and maybe a slightly tighter crop or closer view of the birds...just my thoughts
i like the birds, but would you think it would be better to have the lampost aligned slightly more to the right? and maybe a slightly tighter crop or closer view of the birds...just my thoughts
D danlin New Member Feb 17, 2006 278 0 0 Apr 29, 2006 #8 ya tats wad i tot so too.. i was afraid tt e bird wld fly off so had to take a quick shot.. Haha. thanks for ur suggestions!
ya tats wad i tot so too.. i was afraid tt e bird wld fly off so had to take a quick shot.. Haha. thanks for ur suggestions!
K kentay New Member Nov 13, 2005 108 0 0 Apr 30, 2006 #9 try a rule of thirds crop. its a shame the bird didnt jump off a little bit more =P
A adelynn88 New Member May 6, 2006 79 0 0 May 6, 2006 #11 Good effort! But u can play with the cropping.
D danlin New Member Feb 17, 2006 278 0 0 May 7, 2006 #12 hey, yeah, shld think of more ways to frame the image. Thnks alot!
G GDSNP Senior Member Dec 17, 2003 513 0 16 45 Australia www.flickr.com May 8, 2006 #13 I prefer the improved version.. The buildings were quite distracting in my opinion..
S shojibake New Member Dec 7, 2004 386 0 0 May 8, 2006 #14 The improved version looks better but my preference for the crop would be to have a little more headspace.
The improved version looks better but my preference for the crop would be to have a little more headspace.
D danlin New Member Feb 17, 2006 278 0 0 May 9, 2006 #15 thanks..ya i tot sth was lacking in the improved version.. i'll go try out ur suggestion.. =)