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danlin

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hey guys, ur comments wld be very much apreciated =)
Thanks!
 

danlin

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urm can u guys view e image?

c&c welcome! Thanks alot...
 

danlin

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thnks 4 ur comments. but if there were no birds on the lamp post, it wld be boring n lifeless dun u think? I shld ve cropped it tighter i think...
 

eikin

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i think the city skyline in the background is distracting, you might want to consider alternative positions the next time round :)
 

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i like the birds, but would you think it would be better to have the lampost aligned slightly more to the right? and maybe a slightly tighter crop or closer view of the birds...just my thoughts :)
 

danlin

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ya tats wad i tot so too.. i was afraid tt e bird wld fly off so had to take a quick shot.. Haha. thanks for ur suggestions!
 

kentay

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try a rule of thirds crop.

its a shame the bird didnt jump off a little bit more =P
 

adelynn88

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Good effort! But u can play with the cropping.
 

danlin

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hey, yeah, shld think of more ways to frame the image. Thnks alot!
 

shojibake

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The improved version looks better but my preference for the crop would be to have a little more headspace.
 

danlin

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thanks..ya i tot sth was lacking in the improved version.. i'll go try out ur suggestion.. =)
 

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