looks flat without proper focus...
the way you used the flash has left (almost) no shadows... i think you should focus on a smaller amount of roses and then play with DOF more...
oddly, your sharp pic have not so nice red, and your background red is nicer...
sadly this pic dun work as there isn't anything thats attracting, everything is just shouting for attention and its so messy, i feel its like just a blindshot.
It is a nice bunch of flowers. Their colors however are not uniform so I would have preferred a macro shot of the middle flower which seems to have better color and shape compared to the others.
It is a nice bunch of flowers. Their colors however are not uniform so I would have preferred a macro shot of the middle flower which seems to have better color and shape compared to the others.
Well, I guess the problem there is that all the roses in front are in-focus. That really hurts the effect. And your flash is a bit harsh, a diffuser or warm, natural light and no flash would help.
Well, I guess the problem there is that all the roses in front are in-focus. That really hurts the effect. And your flash is a bit harsh, a diffuser or warm, natural light and no flash would help.