F freefire New Member Aug 27, 2007 54 0 0 East Singapore www.flickr.com May 4, 2008 #1 For your comment
S speck New Member Jan 20, 2006 102 0 0 May 4, 2008 #2 like the pic but the quote is not quite right... you use "a parent" meaning one of the parents i.e. father or mother, and "his children" hence specifying the father, therefore it should be "of his time" rather than "of their time". otherwise nicely done..
like the pic but the quote is not quite right... you use "a parent" meaning one of the parents i.e. father or mother, and "his children" hence specifying the father, therefore it should be "of his time" rather than "of their time". otherwise nicely done..
C calebk Senior Member Jul 25, 2006 10,587 0 0 Clementi May 4, 2008 #4 What are you seeking critique on, specifically?
