A parent's gift


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speck

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like the pic but the quote is not quite right...

you use "a parent" meaning one of the parents i.e. father or mother,
and "his children" hence specifying the father, therefore it should be
"of his time" rather than "of their time".

otherwise nicely done..;)
 

Drumy

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Nice :)

May I ask what font did you use?
 

calebk

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Clementi
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What are you seeking critique on, specifically?
 

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