Thoughtful Nature


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kentfon

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Nice:thumbsup: Good composition...i'm not a pro just my view;)

U fit the lens well:bsmilie:

should have worn a t with nature slogan or something like that ..sori no offense hor kekeke
 

eikin

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A. girl seemingly thinking = thoughtful

B. green palm leaves = nature

A + B = thoughtful nature

don't you think it's somewhat contrived?

for a start, what's the intention of this work, what do you seek to achieve?
 

borisi

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the red thing in the middle of the pic kept me curious.
a bit more makeup (i'm clueless abt tis though) wont hurt. ;)
 

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A. girl seemingly thinking = thoughtful

B. green palm leaves = nature

A + B = thoughtful nature

don't you think it's somewhat contrived?

for a start, what's the intention of this work, what do you seek to achieve?
oh..
the photoshoot is for my proj, which is to redesign MNG spore website. I took a summer theme to the website, so i thought of taking a model wearing MNG clothes with nature bg. ;)

and yes, i guess it is rather designed to be like that, a Thoughtful Nature.
Thx Eikin for your very in depth cmnt! =)
 

dRebelXT

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The clothes doesn't represent MNG well. Viewers' attention is drawn to the skin tone
and the green leaves.
It's a properly composed and exposed photo, but won't do well in the project I think.
 

Rashkae

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It does not, in the least, represent MNG to me. She doesn't look happy in her clothes. She's not showing off the clothes, just her face and the plants.
 

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oh..
the photoshoot is for my proj, which is to redesign MNG spore website. I took a summer theme to the website, so i thought of taking a model wearing MNG clothes with nature bg. ;)

and yes, i guess it is rather designed to be like that, a Thoughtful Nature.
Thx Eikin for your very in depth cmnt! =)

Just a thought. The building in the background does not justify "nature bg". Perhaps you may want to frame your picture without any man-made structure inside, or just scout for another location to shoot.

Cheers
 

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