Thoughtful Nature

[IfourDesign]

Was having a photoshoot with my friend in my schs garden.
C n C.
cos gonna use this picture in my proj.
Thank you all in adv for taking the time to C n C!

 

[kentfon]

Nice:thumbsup: Good composition...i'm not a pro just my view

U fit the lens well:bsmilie:

should have worn a t with nature slogan or something like that ..sori no offense hor kekeke

 

[eikin]

A. girl seemingly thinking = thoughtful

B. green palm leaves = nature

A + B = thoughtful nature

don't you think it's somewhat contrived?

for a start, what's the intention of this work, what do you seek to achieve?

 

[borisi]

the red thing in the middle of the pic kept me curious.
a bit more makeup (i'm clueless abt tis though) wont hurt.

 

[IfourDesign]

A. girl seemingly thinking = thoughtful

B. green palm leaves = nature

A + B = thoughtful nature

don't you think it's somewhat contrived?

for a start, what's the intention of this work, what do you seek to achieve?

oh..
the photoshoot is for my proj, which is to redesign MNG spore website. I took a summer theme to the website, so i thought of taking a model wearing MNG clothes with nature bg.

and yes, i guess it is rather designed to be like that, a Thoughtful Nature.
Thx Eikin for your very in depth cmnt! =)

 

[dRebelXT]

The clothes doesn't represent MNG well. Viewers' attention is drawn to the skin tone
and the green leaves.
It's a properly composed and exposed photo, but won't do well in the project I think.

 

[Rashkae]

It does not, in the least, represent MNG to me. She doesn't look happy in her clothes. She's not showing off the clothes, just her face and the plants.

 

[stbob]

oh..
the photoshoot is for my proj, which is to redesign MNG spore website. I took a summer theme to the website, so i thought of taking a model wearing MNG clothes with nature bg.

and yes, i guess it is rather designed to be like that, a Thoughtful Nature.
Thx Eikin for your very in depth cmnt! =)

Just a thought. The building in the background does not justify "nature bg". Perhaps you may want to frame your picture without any man-made structure inside, or just scout for another location to shoot.

Cheers