The book with memories

[ryuggen]

Constructive CnC welcomes.

 

[Del_CtrlnoAlt]

your post process is extremely bad.

the people in the background look like spirits, the notebook look like a deathnote, the pen look like its floating in mid air, and i dunno where is the memories part except maybe its some unfulfilled task that cause them to linger around the deathnote.

 

[ryuggen]

Thanks Del_CtrlnoAlt.

Please advise how I improve on the picture?

 

[Del_CtrlnoAlt]

y don't u show us the unprocessed and we see what could be the best alternative

 

[Rashkae]

Let's see now...

1. I would have used a better pen, like a mont blanc fountain pen. Not a cheap Popular ballpen with the price sticker still attached.

2. The background is really really bad... Some simple blur would be much better.