The book with memories


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Del_CtrlnoAlt

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your post process is extremely bad.

the people in the background look like spirits, the notebook look like a deathnote, the pen look like its floating in mid air, and i dunno where is the memories part except maybe its some unfulfilled task that cause them to linger around the deathnote.
 

Rashkae

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Let's see now...

1. I would have used a better pen, like a mont blanc fountain pen. Not a cheap Popular ballpen with the price sticker still attached.

2. The background is really really bad... Some simple blur would be much better.
 

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