Sleeping teddy

[NeTHaCk]

Need critical critiques ... Pic is way underexposed i realised.
Need more info help on the settings.

using : f4, 1/6,
already using flash at 1/16, iso 800

using nikkor 35-80 1:4-5.6D

 

[nysheng]

did u use a tripod? looks a slight blur to mi.;p maybe u should try to reorganize the background? it's a little distracting :think:
maybe u can describe wat kind of look u are going for?

 

[night86mare]

under? could be over, def not under
extremely messy
machiam snapshot, no offense meant

 

[NeTHaCk]

Pic was taken in sis's room with her teddy bear..

yes can say more of snapshot..
I was just trying out my new d50(just got it yesterday 2nd hand) and found the teddy under the blanket so just took a snap out of it. took about 15shots and found this the closest to what i have..

seems didnt manage to get the "cute" effect

 

[FrogLAH]

Focus point seem off..unless you wanted to focus around the ribbon-blanket area..

 

[deckard]

teddies don't sleep. they are not alive. :bsmilie:

 

[WoLoh]

teddies don't sleep. they are not alive. :bsmilie:

He not sleeping but posing for the camera. :bsmilie: