Shots taken in Chiangrai

[yehosaphat]

Hi all Critiques, here are some landscape and flower shots taken in Chiangrai. Not really representative of Chiangrai thou but anyway, here they are.

For your comments on how to improve further pls.

1. Yellow flower

2.

3. Evening sky

4. Another perspective

5. Sky

 

[espion]

it cld well have been pics taken in Sg or anywhere on earth, meaning are u trying to show us something abt Chiangrai or just good pics?

 

[yehosaphat]

ok fine... pls ignore the title.

Just need comments on what areas to further improve on the photos.

 

[yehosaphat]

No one wants to comment because my title sala?

 

[espion]

title not the prob but what u are saying is ...

1. yellow flower. the details in the centre is hard to discern. this flower is tough to picture.

2. orchid. play on DOF ok. but kinda oversaturated look again making the flower look flat.

3, 4 n 5. too much empty space. the negative space do not make it an exciting pic. Ok compositionally but boring subject.

... unless I missed what u trying to say ...