Product Shoot

[Junha0]

1. in what area is critique to be sought?


Feedback on composition, lighting, details.

What can be done or tips to improve on the picture and subject?

2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?

To showcase the lens and the details of the lens.

3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)

Taken with an A4 size white paper for the background and a study lamp as lighting.

4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture

I think the right of the picture is slightly overexpose due to the source of light shining on it. Details of the subject is quite sharp.

Thanks

 

[VyzeL]

the shadow is a little bit tad strong. maybe a reflector on the left could help (or something white /reflective)

 

[icyblue]

maybe should position it some other postion to make it feel more interesting or add something? i feel abit empty.