Peony @ titwangsa lake..


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ykgen

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enjoy n comment?

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ykgen

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last three







kam siah for viewing..!
 

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hi ykgen,

i am afraid this series didnt work for me at all.

of all 18 pictures, only 1 of them caught my attention and that is number 15. even then i think a tighter crop with less head-room might do better.

some of the images look like they suffer from harsh flash. for example, in number 16, the wayyyy-too distinct shadow casted by the model's arm really didnt work for me.

i dont like some of the w/b as well. in number 1, there appears to be a blue-ish cast overshadowing the image. even the white top looks blue-ish.

generally, most of the pictures look like snap-shots to me. i always believe a picture reflects a photographer's thoughts and i would say this series seem to lack effort and thoughts in the making of the pictures.

ykgen, this next point is directed solely to you. frankly speaking, i got a big big issue with the scar on the model's left arm. i dont think i am wrong to say that that scar is a major distraction for anyone. the model has got a beautiful smile. however, picture 11 did great unjustice to the model's beautiful smile with the scar screaming for attention.

if i am you, i would avoid the scar as much as i can. at the end of the day, the audiences only see what is within the photographer's frame.

the above are some of the pointers i noticed.

lets continue learning together.

regards,
Jamie
 

ykgen

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wow.. jamie.. i sure learn a lot from your comment.. thanks!
 

leejay

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Best of the lot. ^^


Place the model away from the big wheel. Expression is good though. ^^


You can zoom in for this. ^^


For this kind of pic, u can shoot low-to-high. ^^


Could have been better if you place her in a better position. ^^ Good smile.
 

ykgen

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thanks leejay..
 

acerpic

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I like this 2... :)

#Once you get the right angle, shoots more to get the best moments. CF card is cheap and that moment is precious.. enjoy... :)
 

ykgen

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acerpic.. actually i quite like that two pix too.. because of its "clean" feel.. btw.. i use SD card.. hehehe
 

leod

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I am no pro here... just speaking from what I just saw.

The big mark on her left arm is quite a turn off. Maybe she shouldnt be wearing sleeveless. :dunno:
 

acerpic

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I am no pro here... just speaking from what I just saw.

The big mark on her left arm is quite a turn off. Maybe she shouldnt be wearing sleeveless. :dunno:
Can easily pp away one.. use patch ... :)
 

ykgen

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many have "complained" about the scar.. but i decided to keep it original..
 

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Malaysian?
 

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Hi;

Nice photo...I like the way you crown the girl with the wheel.

Keep it up.

 

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