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t-diddy

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been a while since i post in the critique corner...
just one humble pic that i take from my friends wedding.



any C&C are welcome..
 

Rashkae

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I don't know about the title... It doesn't scream "Passionate". More like "Prepared" or "Waiting for the moment". The angle is a bit odd too, i'd have preferred it without the mic stand and the people to the right.
 

night86mare

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if anythign
the stuff in the background, like someone's head (at the subject's right shoulder)
i think a bag
and the mic stand
are very distracting

maybe you could move them away next time
 

babykailan

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i think you are a very humourous guy.
this kind of expression you call it passionate.

however, not all is lost. more isolation will definitely help. picture also looks a bit soft.
but i think the overall mood is about there.
 

t-diddy

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Hi tahnk you for the C&C.. i guess giving a name for your work isn't as easy as it looks. :). and about the mic i think i cant move that coz he is using it, guess hae to find a better angle next time then.

Thanx again for the comments.
 

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