Passionate


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t-diddy

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been a while since i post in the critique corner...
just one humble pic that i take from my friends wedding.

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any C&C are welcome..
 

I don't know about the title... It doesn't scream "Passionate". More like "Prepared" or "Waiting for the moment". The angle is a bit odd too, i'd have preferred it without the mic stand and the people to the right.
 

if anythign
the stuff in the background, like someone's head (at the subject's right shoulder)
i think a bag
and the mic stand
are very distracting

maybe you could move them away next time
 

i think you are a very humourous guy.
this kind of expression you call it passionate.

however, not all is lost. more isolation will definitely help. picture also looks a bit soft.
but i think the overall mood is about there.
 

Hi tahnk you for the C&C.. i guess giving a name for your work isn't as easy as it looks. :). and about the mic i think i cant move that coz he is using it, guess hae to find a better angle next time then.

Thanx again for the comments.
 

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