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stjustin

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er my sch
how is it arh
added contrast only
18mm F9 ya.
 

Headshotzx

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The spiral staircase to eternal doom.

Umm.. this is a crit section right? Maybe you can tell us what you would like to be criticised.

Anyways, the highlights are blown. Too much contrast I think.
 

stjustin

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The spiral staircase to eternal doom.

Umm.. this is a crit section right? Maybe you can tell us what you would like to be criticised.

Anyways, the highlights are blown. Too much contrast I think.
ok ty!!
 

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Overexposed highlights. And the stairs lead to... where?

Feels like the kids would fall off the face of the earth if they reach the bottom... :p
 

calebk

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Blown highlights, incomplete spiral.

Please read CC instructions for submission. You should do a brief writeup on why you shot the photo and what you would specifically want critique on.
 

mrhello88

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maybe u can make it as b/w? and increase the shadow part?......just a sudden idea...if the center of the spiral is a human and a bit of light is shine on him/her, will it make the whole pic look nicer?
 

night86mare

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composition, and perspective are key here.

your spiral is all joined together, that spoils it. if you can, go higher, or use a wider lens and lean forward more.
 

stylus

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Wondering if it would look nicer if the shutter speed was slower to convey a sense of movement around the staircase?
 

Rashkae

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er my sch
how is it arh
added contrast only
18mm F9 ya.
1. Follow the critique corner rules and include a write-up.

2. USE ENGLISH, not that horrible text-singlish you are using. Learn to communicate.
 

sunboi80

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it's a pity the LHS of the spiral is cut off...
yeah like wat night8mare said, use a wider lens (if u have) and lean fwd more,
i would prefer a squarer crop though... :)
 

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