My sch

[stjustin]

er my sch
how is it arh
added contrast only
18mm F9 ya.

 

[Headshotzx]

The spiral staircase to eternal doom.

Umm.. this is a crit section right? Maybe you can tell us what you would like to be criticised.

Anyways, the highlights are blown. Too much contrast I think.

 

[stjustin]

The spiral staircase to eternal doom.

Umm.. this is a crit section right? Maybe you can tell us what you would like to be criticised.

Anyways, the highlights are blown. Too much contrast I think.

ok ty!!

 

[daxdigital]

Overexposed highlights. And the stairs lead to... where?

Feels like the kids would fall off the face of the earth if they reach the bottom...

 

[calebk]

Blown highlights, incomplete spiral.

Please read CC instructions for submission. You should do a brief writeup on why you shot the photo and what you would specifically want critique on.

 

[mrhello88]

maybe u can make it as b/w? and increase the shadow part?......just a sudden idea...if the center of the spiral is a human and a bit of light is shine on him/her, will it make the whole pic look nicer?

 

[night86mare]

composition, and perspective are key here.

your spiral is all joined together, that spoils it. if you can, go higher, or use a wider lens and lean forward more.

 

[stylus]

Wondering if it would look nicer if the shutter speed was slower to convey a sense of movement around the staircase?

 

[Rashkae]

er my sch
how is it arh
added contrast only
18mm F9 ya.

1. Follow the critique corner rules and include a write-up.

2. USE ENGLISH, not that horrible text-singlish you are using. Learn to communicate.

 

[sunboi80]

it's a pity the LHS of the spiral is cut off...
yeah like wat night8mare said, use a wider lens (if u have) and lean fwd more,
i would prefer a squarer crop though...