Thanks for the comments guys.
#2 - Its near blown out, but it isn't on my calibrated screen. So I am gonna stick with it.
#4 - In the actual picture, the shoulders can be seen quite clearly. In my pp, I darkened it so as to bring your focus to the face and mask.
indaybadiday - Yup, its too big. As a result, I could not use any of my full-frontal shots of the face.
I took part in a 'fashion challenge' workshop organised by Willis. We had 2 models and a whole range of accessories to choose from to spice up our models. We had around 1hr to work out our concept, after that, we had to brief the model and dress her up for a 30min 'concept shoot'. It was pretty fun, but challenging, esp for me since I am inexperienced in women fashion.