lastboltnut said:Very nice and cheerful for me.....doesn't feel lonely.... May be more groomy weather will make the lonliness more....
You ride a bike on such a long road ah?? You Iron-Man?? After take will run and swim in the sea??:bsmilie:
Pablo said:Very nice photo, good composition also I think.
A nice photo to look at and think about.
But taking in the title, it would be best if the people were not there.
Cheers
Blade777 said:Maybe during a sunset would have brought u closer to loneliness! Also a newbie here..heheh
scud said:imo, the orig photo can be improved by some cropping.
the empty space at the bottom is just redundant and doest help.
by focusing closer on the bicycle (with some rule of 3rd) and the long road ahead (with the lines vanishing into the horizon), u can still get the sense of loneliness in the photo.
foxtwo said:my preference, more road less sky. and bump the colours up a little.
dominator said:To me this is more like a snapshot of a bicycle with nice background, nothing much of a lonesome road.
"Not enough road"
shojibake said:The original is nice. The markings on the road leads the eye to the horizon and so does the sloping landscape and the edge of the road. The bicycle as well is angled the same way. It all makes for a nicely composed photo. There isn't a sense of lonesomeness though. It is on the other hand very cheerful. And it's the bicycle that draws the focus because it's the only thing that breaks the flow of the scene.
Maybe a title like yellow bicycle would work. Or a slightly more arty farty - yellow bicycle under shade of sun.
I agree. Either more road, less sky, or more sky, less road (I would prefer this). Half-half doesn't quite seem to work.scud said:imo, the orig photo can be improved by some cropping.
the empty space at the bottom is just redundant and doest help.
by focusing closer on the bicycle (with some rule of 3rd) and the long road ahead (with the lines vanishing into the horizon), u can still get the sense of loneliness in the photo.
Jwenz said:It gives me a "found happiness within the bounderies of loneliness"(sounds weird) feeling...
Cause i prefer to be alone..
peaceful...
but i think if it adds a little more contrast.. it will look better?..
wattky said:Yup I guess u took the words out of my mind :bsmilie: