Laid Back...

[Wolfgang]

It's been awhile... so here we go...

As usual, constructive comments & critiques are welcomed.

 

[nemesis32]

It's been awhile... so here we go...

As usual, constructive comments & critiques are welcomed.

Me again! This time i don't really like it as the pose or rather the head of the model seems weird? Maybe is the angle....

 

[Angel80]

Think the cropping may have affected the overall feel of the photo... maybe a 3/4 body crop rather than a near half-body crop will be better?

Just my thots...

Rgds

 

[mervin420]

the grains doesnt work here. or maybe its the clothes n the picture output that doesnt work here. doesnt work for me.

my 2 cents.

 

[Stoned]

i think it looks pretty professionally done and has an overall classic feel to it. It would be perfect IMO if there would be some dusty air in the background but i still like it the way it is. My only complaint is that the title doesn't fit, he doesn't look very laid back.
I think it would make a pretty good ad :thumbsup: can visualise it in a smart casual wear store

 

[Stoned]

oh erm and just noticed something else which i now find very distracting.
The pants have folded and is bulging out(where the model's hands are). Not very er... nice :sweat: (for lack of a better term)

 

[Witness]

haha...its really been a while....

wel...i tink the overall composition is good...got a nice feel to it....
but the tilt of the head is funny le.... maybe can tilt downwards and look at the cam instead...

perhaps throw in a nice commercial like smile ahha

juz my 2 cts.....cheers..

 

[Wolfgang]

Hi all,

thanks for all the feedback. Appreciate it.

Cheers.