Fenny ~ East Borneo

[RastaCooL]

This Is My First Time To Post Here. Please Help Me Improve My Skill
C&C Welcome!

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Thanks For Viewing

 

[roya1princess]

My picks will be #2 and #3.

#2: I like the composition (the model with the tree), but the background is abit distracting.

#3: I like the feel of it, but could be better if more of the model's face.

I didnt really like #1 and #3.

#1: I cant see even one eye of the model.

#3: I don't like the shadows on her face. Perhaps give more light there?

 

[Rashkae]

Imho you applied WAY too much gaussian blur on her skin. She already looks plastic/fake.

 

[papermelodydoll]

u used Diffuse Glow right? too much.. yah. makes her look abit fake

 

[m3lv1nh0]

The costume is too crumpled.

 

[RastaCooL]

My picks will be #2 and #3.

#2: I like the composition (the model with the tree), but the background is abit distracting.

#3: I like the feel of it, but could be better if more of the model's face.

I didnt really like #1 and #3.

#1: I cant see even one eye of the model.

#3: I don't like the shadows on her face. Perhaps give more light there?

Thanks For Ur C&C

 

[RastaCooL]

u used Diffuse Glow right? too much.. yah. makes her look abit fake

Yes, I Used It.

Imho you applied WAY too much gaussian blur on her skin. She already looks plastic/fake.

I Think She Like It ;p

Thanks For Ur C&C .
So Next Time I Will Reduce The Glow And Gaussian Part.:thumbsup:

 

[xavierlum]

#01,
Hmm... im a bit more detail. Look at #01, the sleeves are all so crumpled.
Probably you may want to work on your set before taking the pic

 

[RayTravis]

Is the softness intentional..?
if no.. you might wanna work on that..