city landscapess

[ilyas]

1

2)

3)

the 3rd one was actually taken at the airport.
i could really use some feedback and tips pleaseeeee.

 

[Shutt3rbug]

think your sensor is dirty. can see a few spots of dust.

 

[ilyas]

yea i know. i didnt clean it that day..

 

[Chew Siow Ming]

NSC CCD clening $26++

 

[29tim05]

but you should PS the dirty away before you send for critique...

 

[espion]

1 & 2, good idea, but need more drama in the skies to work. 2 is better, but not yet.

3 is actually interesting, but again not yet. Maybe too much distraction in the seemingly random lights. Also need stronger lines.

(And also I think you must learn to ignore non-critique critque and other kinds of silly nit-picking here.)