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ilyas

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the 3rd one was actually taken at the airport.
i could really use some feedback and tips pleaseeeee.
 

ilyas

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yea i know. i didnt clean it that day..
 

espion

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1 & 2, good idea, but need more drama in the skies to work. 2 is better, but not yet.

3 is actually interesting, but again not yet. Maybe too much distraction in the seemingly random lights. Also need stronger lines.

(And also I think you must learn to ignore non-critique critque and other kinds of silly nit-picking here.)
 

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