i believe Frodo has got some good PP skills here. can see from other series that Carlee's complexion isn't perfect. but in this series, Carlee gives off this very clean and comforting allure, a refreshing series indeed!
#1 is the most captivating. Carlee's black and silky hair strikes a very good contrast with her fair and clean complexion. her eyes are dying to tell a story and i am sure many would be happy to hear it. however, its a pity that her pose is in a tad bit awkward position. her right shoulder seems too flat, thus it started looking weird after a while. the surface area of the shoulder just ain't proportional.
#2: i wouldn't have put up this image. does nothing to tell a story. this image would only have made it if you had went lower to establish some kind of connection with her. now, its just a snap shot.
#3 is my second favorite. a simple composition that captured the mood. but do take note of your cropping the next time. i would definitely prefer her left hand to be not cropped away. in fact, i think its quite an abrupt crop in this picture, but the nicely executed mood managed to save some grace.
#4: i believe everyone gets the idea this image is trying to get across. but i think there are lots of room for improvement, do explore other angles to get such a shot next time.
#5 is tricky. the way her right hand is positioned makes her look like she is holding herself up, making it an awkward pose. do take note that the background model is against is white, and her top is also white. i think this causes the eyes to drift away from the subject, or get distracted. but nicely captured nevertheless.
most of other photographers who posted their Carlee series really ought to take a look at this series and reflect upon their work. not that theirs are bad, (some are bad though) but this is really a refreshing series that in my opinion managed to justify Carlee's beauty the most as compared to the other series.
