By George I've done it

[Manda]

My first successful attempt at posting a piccie in clubsnap!
Constructive comments most welcome

 

[die Blende]

I find the mood brought abt by the colour very appealing
The kids eyes is very attention grabbing very sharp i would say thus drawing my attention to the kid
but i do find the mans and the kids hand a bit distracting a tighter crop on the kid to make the viewer wonder why she is sulking/unhappy/angry would be my preference..

thats my humble opinion

regards

 

[Pynch]

If the man had worn a darker colour shirt, then the viewer would not be distracted by the white patch on the left. Overall, a nice photo.

 

[CreaXion]

If the man had worn a darker colour shirt, then the viewer would not be distracted by the white patch on the left. Overall, a nice photo.

Nice mood but was the white shirt intentional

 

[Manda]

Great comments - thanks guys.

The shirt is overblown & I don't have the PS skills yet to amend it's distraction.

I also find the out of focus hands a hinderance to my enjoyment of the piccie.

As for that petulant look - I think it was her way of telling me to take the camera out of her face!

Keep the feed back coming!