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die Blende

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I find the mood brought abt by the colour very appealing
The kids eyes is very attention grabbing very sharp i would say thus drawing my attention to the kid
but i do find the mans and the kids hand a bit distracting a tighter crop on the kid to make the viewer wonder why she is sulking/unhappy/angry would be my preference..

thats my humble opinion

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Pynch

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If the man had worn a darker colour shirt, then the viewer would not be distracted by the white patch on the left. Overall, a nice photo.
 

CreaXion

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If the man had worn a darker colour shirt, then the viewer would not be distracted by the white patch on the left. Overall, a nice photo.
Nice mood but was the white shirt intentional
 

Manda

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Great comments - thanks guys.

The shirt is overblown & I don't have the PS skills yet to amend it's distraction.

I also find the out of focus hands a hinderance to my enjoyment of the piccie.

As for that petulant look - I think it was her way of telling me to take the camera out of her face!

Keep the feed back coming!
 

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