bus ticket

[renaissance_myth]

this is a picture i took of my bus ticket on the way to work. still new at photography so please advise.

 

[renaissance_myth]

anyone?

 

[siron]

Bus ticket ahhh.. heheh I dunno what to say leh. on the taking, well okay lah. 50% ? Just take more shots!

 

[mpenza]

:dunno:

what do you want to tell us with the pic?

 

[siron]

try our luck on 4D...?? 9132? hehe

 

[sbs99]

Not a bad try! I like the morning light on the piece of paper...maybe moved it alittle to the side? Rule of thirds?

 

[eadwine]

nice.. maybe try it in black and white.
bring the contrast up alittle...

 

[renaissance_myth]

Originally posted by sbs99
Not a bad try! I like the morning light on the piece of paper...maybe moved it alittle to the side? Rule of thirds?

it was in the late afternoon and the sun was blazing. hehe i also kinda like the light effect. looks 'cool' to a newbie like me. btw thanx to all for the comments. greatly appreciated. what is the rule of thirds?

 

[megaweb]

Originally posted by renaissance_myth

what is the rule of thirds?

read here

http://www.photozone.de/compose/third.htm