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renaissance_myth

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this is a picture i took of my bus ticket on the way to work. still new at photography so please advise. :)


 

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Not a bad try! I like the morning light on the piece of paper...maybe moved it alittle to the side? Rule of thirds?
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nice.. maybe try it in black and white.
bring the contrast up alittle...
 

renaissance_myth

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Originally posted by sbs99
Not a bad try! I like the morning light on the piece of paper...maybe moved it alittle to the side? Rule of thirds?
:)

it was in the late afternoon and the sun was blazing. hehe i also kinda like the light effect. looks 'cool' to a newbie like me. btw thanx to all for the comments. greatly appreciated. what is the rule of thirds?
 

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