Attempting to start a comic series.
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think you should learn how draw with layers and use a tablet to have brush like lines... your lines are flat... and art work looks like a 5 year old one... after view, no intention to read on the words nor interested in the strip.
Definitely need to improve on the drawing... it doesn't have to look detailed, but the basics of form and posture, weight, proportions, action line should be there... after that, work on your humour, cause I don't think it's very funny...
http://poopinesses.deviantart.com/ Check out his/her stuff. Simple stick figure drawings, but the person have the essentials (expressions, action lines, proportions) done right. And of course, the humour is top notch. (though it ain't about cameras) :thumbsup:
And of course, don't copy. People can easily tell. Give your character a bg story, personality (even if you don't plan to include it in the comic strip), and work your ideas partly based on those details.
E.g. He's short, so he always have to call in the 'ladder gang' to help him.
http://poopinesses.deviantart.com/ Check out his/her stuff. Simple stick figure drawings, but the person have the essentials (expressions, action lines, proportions) done right. And of course, the humour is top notch. (though it ain't about cameras) :thumbsup:
And of course, don't copy. People can easily tell. Give your character a bg story, personality (even if you don't plan to include it in the comic strip), and work your ideas partly based on those details.
E.g. He's short, so he always have to call in the 'ladder gang' to help him.
Your 3rd scene is very politically subjective. I like the idea. Good job on the series. But do take note of the politics though.Alright.
How about this
GMAN
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