1st Attempt on DSLR

[Yeeming9]

ISO 100
F11
30 sec
EV -2/3

C&Cs are welcomed.

 

[smrt173]

wow. very good for a 1st attempt
the reflections are nice and sharp.
what lens and body do you use?

 

[Yeeming9]

Thank you.

I am using Canon 450D with EFS 10-22mm lens.

wow. very good for a 1st attempt
the reflections are nice and sharp.
what lens and body do you use?

 

[choy0014]

just my 2 cents worth, but wouldnt the skyline(esplanade plus buildings) look nicer on the botton 1/3 of the picture? looks abit weird at the top 1/3. great colors though!

 

[Yeeming9]

Thank you.

I will try it next week.

just my 2 cents worth, but wouldnt the skyline(esplanade plus buildings) look nicer on the botton 1/3 of the picture? looks abit weird at the top 1/3. great colors though!

 

[icemangrafx]

Very nice and good 1st attempt! Almost no noise. Looks great. Keep up the good work.

Regards,
Jay

 

[shaoken]

just my 2 cents worth, but wouldnt the skyline(esplanade plus buildings) look nicer on the botton 1/3 of the picture? looks abit weird at the top 1/3. great colors though!

I agree.. Too much emphasis on the water.

 

[Tokyoexpress]

Thank you.

I am using Canon 450D with EFS 10-22mm lens.

Very Good for 1st attempt~~~ Nice work~ Better than some who so call pro... lol~

 

[pinholecam]

I would crop off the bottom 2/5. It is just dark and does not contribute much to the nice scene.
Nicely done, as a whole, but I would crop as mentioned above.

 

[Raincheque]

Hi YM,

Nice shot, but I think the horizon is slightly tilted..

Cheers!

 

[dinotech]

Good 1st try...keep it up hwr just nitty stuff.

The horizon isn't straight, I'd also prob zoom in a little more tighter leaving out the dark portion of the sea at the bottom and adding a little sky. You might want to do it at 20-25 secs instead of 30, this you've got to experiment, so that the lights on the Mandarin hotel do not seem to blown out.

 

[Aisyah]

At least better than mine.

 

[allenleonhart]

hmm. something looks off:x why do i keep thinking taking multiple photos and stitching them up together will look way nicer?
:/
composition wise i pretty much agree with the above. too much of water:x just shift up a lil. see the longest blue line?
dun exceed that. then shld be ok.

rawr somehow it looks chopped offed leh:x any comments?

mmmh. maybe i crop tat photo u uploaded then try to show u what i mean

hehe;D a lil cropping helps. btw note i also edited the left of the pic a lil. or else that chopped off part seriously gets on my nerves:x

is this wad u all meant ?