http://www.flickr.com/photos/66951331@N05/6130682310/
1. in what area is critique to be sought?
overall composition of the pic, exposure. tried to choose a less distracting section to take as there are alot of trees along that stretch of road.
2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
better composition, better colour effect of the sky, making viewer to feel like sitting down and see the sun set all the way
3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
taken just before i was knocking off from my work. could feel the sun's heat and the night breeze together while sitting at the bench and having a puff.
4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
tried to put together the clouds, the sky's gradient colour and the sun. but now it seems like lost focus. just felt something is missing
1. in what area is critique to be sought?
overall composition of the pic, exposure. tried to choose a less distracting section to take as there are alot of trees along that stretch of road.
2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
better composition, better colour effect of the sky, making viewer to feel like sitting down and see the sun set all the way
3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
taken just before i was knocking off from my work. could feel the sun's heat and the night breeze together while sitting at the bench and having a puff.
4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
tried to put together the clouds, the sky's gradient colour and the sun. but now it seems like lost focus. just felt something is missing