The Mask

[Canonised]

Went on the last day of the exhibition, took an image of the Mask ..... thick glass reflection, and poor lighting... PS and try out a dummy post card .... plse C & C ...thanks.

 

[Chris Lim]

Not a critic but just share what i think i might know and make sense of.

In the old days where statues as such are built, its artform is very much derived from symmetry. I figured based on the perspective of this image presented that you had various restrictions in your compositing of the subject. I cant really comment further cos i really dunno in which area you are presenting this piece for comments.

As a post card i think the essense of the symmetry needs to be there. thats about as much as you can do subject wise.

Hope my comments makes a little sense and helps in someways. =)

 

[tribal.snake]

ur mask is tilted.
overall as a postcard, not bad.
watch the unused space, no balance.

 

[ortega]

image of mask is nice, like the lighting
but composition of postcard and choice of font could be better

eg: below