your 2 posts here din work for me ...... she was scantily dressed but she looked cheerful ? expressionless on the first pic ? :think:
IMHO, u could ve developed further into something sexy or sensual.....and that right hand ....very distracting
maybe, should ask her to simulate the unbuttoning of her blouse while u shoot her at different angles or ask her to 'play' with her blouse.... tease the camera --- er...not you :devil: ask her to bite her blouse ....blah blah blah