Was told this place may be gone in time to come, so I went there to take a few snaps. As I am beginning, only started less than a month, I had difficulties initially with the exposures (at that point in time, not yet read any books on exposure, just pure experimentation). This was one of the photo which I liked more.
1. in what area is critique to be sought?
Exposure and composition. I hope to get some feed back also on the general feel of this photo, like what impression it leaves you and also the proportioning and angle.
2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
Personally I like to try to reproduce what I see with my eye. I was looking up at the sky and I thought I like this angle, so I took a shot and did the greyscale in pp.
3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
Glaring day and a complete noob who couldn't handle the glare of the sky and the exposure. Most of the shots had the sky being over exposed as I don't yet have a gnd filter.
4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the pictures
For me, I remember the times when I boarded the train bound for M'sia when I was young. It has a nostalgic value, and the dull colour of the photo suits a greyscale, imho.
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