Sophie...

[weisun]

Had a shoot recently.. it's her first time posing for shoots.. here you for.. C&C welcomed for improvement..

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[Octarine]

#3 and #5 gets my vote. But the composition could be changed a bit. There's too much empty space in the picture and the face is placed into the corner.

 

[weisun]

thank you... will take note...

 

[Rashkae]

Adding a faded and slightly cross-processed look does not detract from her stiff posing or the awkward "squatting" shots.

 

[trd2970]

I prefer more eye contact

 

[sup3rm2n]

Your pictures have the fashion magazine type of feel. Those that you will see in Taiwanese or japanese magazine.

 

[weisun]

Thanks Rashkae.. noted.... I feel the same.. will get my model to feel more relaxed next time...

trd2970, thank you for your comment... will try to compose some with eye contacts next time.

sup3rm2n, thanks for your compliment.. will keep shooting...

 

[RayTravis]

composition is fine for me..

Good set of photos! Shoot more.. =)

Thumbs up!!

 

[blackandyellow]

Some standing poses would be nice. Nice work btw

 

[weisun]

RayTravis.. thank you......

blackandyellow, unfortunately the sets that I have. was not very good.. the standing poses not too ideal... will try next time..