some pics asking for comments from newbie...

[erictan8888]

hi,

took some shots at punggol park.... hee hee....

comments appreciated so can learn and improve....

 

[zerofour]

erm... i'm not photographer just giving comment...

erm... this image focus is everywhere.... maybe u would wan to only focus the area where u set the theme is... hope my comment helps ;p

 

[Witness]

1) colors look alittle too off... the idea is there....but wat bout using more dof on the first ring instead??

2) eh...painting like....but lacks a theme le....dramatic lighting will further enhance this shot...though we understand tt its often close to impossible to get tt here...

juz my 2 cts worth...

cheers...

 

[sin77]

1. I think there should be only 1 focal point which is at the end of the rings.
2. I like it very much... to me its quite artistic.

 

[yanyewkay]

1.) nice perspective.. maybe during the weekends when little kids are playing and you can frame one kid inside playing would be prefect.

2.) erm.. wait for some falling leaves or birds to get a nice composition?

OT:
erictan888: so you bought a digital cam already? which did you buy?

 

[erictan8888]

hi yanyewkay,

bought liao.... its a D70 !!!!! hee hee
very pleased with the camera.... though not much time to go and play around with it...
the weather laterly has not been too good.....