smoking old man

[AqUaRiU5]

havent been posting much pics...here's one

smoking old man


did a little adjustments to the curves and levels. added grains. found tt the original colour version did not give a bigger impact. hope ya guys like it

 

[AqUaRiU5]

no comments?

 

[isomers007]

Hi,

since your title is smoking old man, mebbe you could do a tighter crop on the man...and take a pic when he is smoking too. couldnt exactly see the cig he's holding..

 

[AqUaRiU5]

tighter crop

http://www.pbase.com/image/18274824


couldnt exactly see him smoking...hope this one is better

 

[nivlek28]

Hi somehow...I still find both pics too distracting. The van plus the wall plus the sign board plus the post... Your eyes don't fall on the guy first ...well maybe it does but it soon wanders all over! :bsmilie:

Anyway...nice avatar!

Maybe a landscape view might help...Cheers!

 

[djchris]

Or perhaps a change of caption like "Taking a break"?

 

[kn34]

Originally posted by AqUaRiU5
tighter crop

http://www.pbase.com/image/18274824


couldnt exactly see him smoking...hope this one is better

Hi the tighter crop look better but I find that the tone a little flat,try bump it up in PS.Just my 2 cents worth

 

[AqUaRiU5]

thanks of all your comments...ya i have to say it was a little distracting when i first saw the results...i tried adjusting the levels and curves already...i wanna give it a b/w film feel to it instead of a digital feel...

 

[AqUaRiU5]

haha..tt avatar has been used since i started joining clubsnap