Sleep Baby Sleep


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catsr03

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B/W would work better. Also, too many blown highlights. An indoor shoot, or a shot with more shadows would work better.
 

Thanks for your critique. Will look to adjust the settings on my CAM.
 

This shot is very natual and well-composed. Perhaps u can adjust the levels and saturation so that it will look even better on-screen. :thumbsup:
 

Adjust for you. But I prefer accurate WB instead of adjusting by software. :D

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naah, i prefer the first one... the brightness is infectious (in a positive way) and the composition is near optimum (i would take away the washed out bottom left corner along with some back ground on the left by around 1 inch (screen measurement) as it does not add any value to the shot). the slightly overexposed bg helps by not being a distraction from the correctly exposed subject. the thing i find quite intriguing is the sort of haircut the baby has in first shot (or atleast thats my perception). hair in second shot look normal but its too gloomy for me, despite being rich in saturation.

thanks.
 

Nice photo capture @ right moment..I like it..Er......but the edited version should ask the TS permission bah.....hmm..
 

Very natural.
I prefer the original.
It reminds me is bedtime now... :bsmilie:
 

thank you all for the critique. will look forward to posting more photos here.
 

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