Pretty good story and photography.
Couple of nitpik that I found rather distracting. Why was the model wearing a black bra underneath? Don't give me modesty concerns as an excuse. If that is the case, wear something that is less apparent, and the photographer should take care of the angle and composition to NOT show the bra.
The LCD TV in one of the shot is mood destroying to the 9th degree, so was the "do not obstruct" sign under the window on another.