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chegr

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1. in what area is critique to be sought?
Composition

2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
Not much. I was just practicing my composition technique.

3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
I was walking around the back alley in Chinatown, and the rusty color caught my attention.

4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
Rust resembles a decaying/ageing process, but against this background it can look quite pretty. I did adjust the color using Sadie tool in Bibble Pro to accentuate the rust against grey background.

TIA for the c&c.

The picture itself:
 

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the rust looks colored in. odd coloration

being ur title is rusty, maybe an idea would be to make the pipes rusty too.

other wise, the composition seems very open, a tight crop would be nice.

if this pic is one of a series, then makes sense. by itself, dun really bring out the rusty title
 

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