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chegr

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1. in what area is critique to be sought?
Composition

2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
Not much. I was just practicing my composition technique.

3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
I was walking around the back alley in Chinatown, and the rusty color caught my attention.

4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
Rust resembles a decaying/ageing process, but against this background it can look quite pretty. I did adjust the color using Sadie tool in Bibble Pro to accentuate the rust against grey background.

TIA for the c&c.

The picture itself:
 

tribal.snake

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west side!
the rust looks colored in. odd coloration

being ur title is rusty, maybe an idea would be to make the pipes rusty too.

other wise, the composition seems very open, a tight crop would be nice.

if this pic is one of a series, then makes sense. by itself, dun really bring out the rusty title
 

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