Portraiture attempt on a beautiful lady.

[tanglewire]

C&C are welcome
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[tanglewire]

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[Fapic]

Are my eyes playing tricks on me?

The backgrounds are tilted, whereas the model isn't. Hmmmm

i quite like 3 and 5, though

 

[tanglewire]

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[tanglewire]

Are my eyes playing tricks on me?

The backgrounds are tilted, whereas the model isn't. Hmmmm

i quite like 3 and 5, though

bro i also have the same question for myself and i was told it's the lens distortion from my d60 kit lens.

 

[tanglewire]

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[Akatsuki]

Hi tanglewire... i see an improvement in your new pic :thumbsup:

but just wondering, why are you re-posting old pic that you post last week? ;p

 

[tanglewire]

Hi tanglewire... i see an improvement in your new pic :thumbsup:

but just wondering, why are you re-posting old pic that you post last week? ;p

don't mind me but i really wish to know the new comments from the brothers in CS after redoing the post processing with putting the critics into serious consideration.

really glad to know that i've improve from it, thanks bro.

 

[sinned79]

OT abit.
she's your gf?

 

[tanglewire]

Yes haha

 

[r0n1n]

I'm not sure if its my monitor but I find most of the pics too contrasty. Try to reduce the contrast.

 

[maldito]

Yes haha

does she have a sister?

 

[eleveninth]

does she have a sister?

lol. :devil:

 

[yqt]

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This one takes my cake !!! :thumbsup:

 

[Soundaholic]

have to disagree with the framing of #1, feels like her hands are chopped off the frame and there is too much empty space above her

 

[sprewell]

you realize that her head is crooked in most photos? Not the best pose for her...

 

[Deadpoet]

Yes, model does look beautiful. But I have to use my best imagination to see thru the underachieving photography.

The attempt failed to depict the model's beauty.

 

[tanglewire]

i reprocess some of the photos, adjustment to the saturation. let me know what u guys think.

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[rubberbands]

May I know where #3 was? Its a good pose and seems quite a good background for multishot

 

[tanglewire]

national museum !