you title it a 'Photojournal pic' but i don't know what you are trying to say in this picture. like what Ben1223 says, yes, you need a caption. A photojournalist must know how to write as well.
.. this photo is taken from my china trip. I dun rem which province but it was one of the rural ones where there are no street lights at all. The only lights in the streets were these hawkers selling food. I find that there is a lot of energy in this scene so I took the pic..
when you take a picture: ask yourself why you like the scene that makes you wanna capture it? Then it would be easier for you to translate that same feeling into your pic.