Photo Series of Melody @ Millenia Walk

[ordinaryless]

forgot to add this point..

#5 is too slanted to my liking. the idea is good but a not-so-slant approach might be better. jus slight slant will do the trick.

Just my opinions

 

[Pinkishy]

thank ordinaryless..will take note of that.. :lovegrin:

Anymore comments/tips? :sweat:

 

[yeocolin]

Your last few pictures will benefit much if fill flash was used to illuminate her face.

Your friend is a natural in front of camera. She could very well earn some extra cash with free-lance modelling. She seems like a natural for it, although it helps that you 2 are such great friends.

You are very creative with your angles and compositions! Keep it up.

 

[edwinywh]

Well,I would say nice try. :thumbsup:

I suggest u throw in some fill in flash.The background is brighter than the subject,dun u find?

Maybe if u zoom in all the way and take some half-body,3 quarters shot will be nice.

So lucky of u to have a relaxed model to let u shoot.
Good one!